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Wow, another one of 102932748 boring straight games now... suit yourself...

Pretty pathetic tho, to bend to some morons instead of following your own plan...

So, just wanted to say, this looks pretty promising so far, nice work, a well known scenario, but some intresting spins on it (like Son and Neighboor being in it together instead of "Rivals", like that) Certainly will keep an eye on it and think about a lil pledge.

PS: I hope you keep up that the Husbands perspective is completly skippable, very much prefer the immersion it gives only to have my MCs perspective. :)

I mean, it would make sense if you want to go longer then 30 days :D (and keep a bit of a forced thing going) :D

So, first of all, nice \o/ :D

Some input tho after playing into Claires stuff: I mean, I love getting into the thick of it fast, but damn... :D some introduction to the characters after the intro would help, also some closing off, like, yeah, the guys in the locker think she is an easy lay if she lets Andrew bang her, but they do so without her even meetting Andrew, which is kinda weird. Also, some introduction to Sex Work, like discussing with the spouse how to make money or something? Its just bang, go for it now :D

Dunno, maybe you plan to do all that, after all this is mostly a overhaul of the systems, so I guess you will go onto story and stuff more in coming updates :D

Haven't seen Paul yet, because sad he didn't get as much love q.q gimme bunch of Paul stuff xPP 

Looking really good, pretty much just as good as fully hand drawn and damn, I would take that for the time saving too... :D

It certainly looks "cleaner" then fully drawn (for lack of a better word), but I think it comes pretty close to the same charme of the handdrawn backgrounds, if not 100% of course, but if it makes it more efficient then thats a pretty good trade off I would say :)

Ouuh, we are gettin close huh? Exited to find out whats going on xP

Pfuuuuh, not sure I like dis as a Bisexual who wants everything xP

But I will stay positive and watch how it goes :P

The background picture, haha :D 

Overall nice tho, yep :D

Well, that looks promising, I mean, it is very early, so I don't want to criticise the content or lack thereof at the moment :D

To the animations tho, don't know if they can be sharpened up a bit? But the most glaring part is for me the speed, they feel a bit too fast? Minor thing tho and it seems you are still working on the basic parts there, will definitly keep an eye on this tho and hope for more stuff in the future :D

I mean, I like the setting and tags, and games with content for F/M and M/M are so rare :x :D and the main chars seem cute :D

I actually like that the bully character isn't some muscle bear for once, but a somewhat normal guy with a big dick :D

Not much content yet, but a promising start.

Dont see why you shouldnt do explicit sex scenes with him, he is 18 and done... if someone doesnt want to see a scene it's easy to choose against it after all? I mean, what next, no Main Character x Headmaster because too much age difference ect? Its not "You need to look 18 years old", its "You need to BE 18 years old" after all xD

And tbh, I dont see a big age difference in looks between him and the main character O_O

Well, if you dont do it its okay too, if you want that, but do what you want, not what someone thinks you should :D

I would agree with that, the pictures are the eye candy, sure, seeing many of them is great, but yeah, the storyflow is mostly trough text and bringing in more text and details in it improves the overall story. I would say its in the balance, you dont want people to look at the same picture for 10 minutes while reading (obviously :D), but you dont need a new picture every 10 seconds either :D Plus: Text brings out all the details you cant put in a picture, so it makes the scenes lively and believable :D

Other then that, mhm, for now I would focus on storytelling I guess and if you want to bring in new funtionalities, one at a time is probably best :D

Well, you should try things out of course :D just one after another, too many of these games crash because they try to do 20 things at the same time ^^, but since you know that yourself I have a good feeling for that :D and as said, for a beginner its a really good start :) will certainly see that I play the updates and give feedback:)

Well, I can work with that :D

For a beginner in this the quality is really high, so I hope for much more in the future, would be absolutly willing to bring a few bucks out when its a bit bigger for this ^^ 

And I do like how the scenes, especially the locker room one, differ greatly depending on the relationship/choices (though, why can Vincent get left behind tied up and body marked in the locker room, but not me? Give me equality!!! ;DD, na, still like the scene :D), instead of being just slight variations ^^, but looking at that it is probably good that you concentrate more on one more linear single route, that spares you the mistake of many others to make too much routes, which slows down the progress. 

It certainly is a great start, I especially love the design of the main character.

Hope you keep this going :3

(Personally I would appreciate a little Textdocument with Tips for Routes to go, no need for something fancy, I just like to see the other scenes after I done a blind play in games like that, but thats just me. :D)